It not is my bagWhat are eight and sixI‘m in No.4 middle schoolThis is our teacher.We love she very muchthere is a big apple in the treeLet's to play with themWhat's are in the box?There are some apples.The all boys are hereI think this is

It not is my bagWhat are eight and sixI‘m in No.4 middle schoolThis is our teacher.We love she very muchthere is a big apple in the treeLet's to play with themWhat's are in the box?There are some apples.The all boys are hereI think this is

It not is my bag

What are eight and six

I‘m in No.4 middle school

This is our teacher.We love she very much

there is a big apple in the tree

Let's to play with them

What's are in the box?There are some apples.

The all boys are here

I think this is a good book.----I don't think it

Each of us have a new desk.

He doesn't like hamburgers and chicken.

In weekends,what time do you usually run?

Mike gets to home at about 4:50 in the afternoon

is this his book?Yes,it's

For lunch,what do Lucy like to eat?

Does your brother have the lunch at school?

He often play games after school

Because music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.

My mother likes to see a book in the evening

It not is my bagWhat are eight and sixI‘m in No.4 middle schoolThis is our teacher.We love she very muchthere is a big apple in the treeLet's to play with themWhat's are in the box?There are some apples.The all boys are hereI think this is
It not is my bag
改为：It is not my bag.
What are eight and six
改为：What is eight and six?
I‘m in No.4 middle school
改为：I‘m in No.4 Middle School.
This is our teacher.We love she very much改为：This is our teacher.We love （her） very much
there is a big apple in the tree
改为：There is a big apple on the tree
Let's to play with them
改为：Let's play with them
What's are in the box?There are some apples.
改为：What are there in the box?There are some apples.
The all boys are here
改为：All the boys are here
I think this is a good book.----I don't think it
改为:I think this is a good book.----I don't think so.
Each of us have a new desk.
改为：Each of us has a new desk.
He doesn't like hamburgers and chicken.
改为：He doesn't like hamburger and chicken
In weekends,what time do you usually run?
改为:At weekends,what time do you usually run?
Mike gets to home at about 4:50 in the afternoon
改为：Mike gets home at about 4:50 in the afternoon
is this his book?Yes,it's
改为：Is this his book?Yes,it's his.
For lunch,what do Lucy like to eat?
改为：For lunch,what does Lucy like to eat?
Does your brother have the lunch at school?
改为:Does your brother have lunch at school?
He often play games after school
改为：He often plays games after school
Because music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.
改为：Because music is relaxing,Jones likes it.
或者Music is relaxing,so Jones likes it.
My mother likes to see a book in the evening
改为：My mother likes to read a book in the evening
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it is not my bag.
I‘m in the No.4 middle school
This is our teacher.We love her very much
there is a big apple on the tree
Let's go to play with them
What's are in the box?There ar...

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it is not my bag.
I‘m in the No.4 middle school
This is our teacher.We love her very much
there is a big apple on the tree
Let's go to play with them
What's are in the box?There are some apples in the box
All boys are here.
I think this is a good book.----I don't think it good
“Each of us has a new desk.
He dosen`t like hamburger and chicken.
On weekends,what time do you usually run?
is this his book?Yes,it's his.
For lunch,what does Lucy like to eat?
Does your brother have lunch at school?
He often plays games after school
Because music is relaxing, Jones likes it.
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8.去掉the
9.it改为so
10.have改为has
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1.is在not前
2.are改为is
3.No.4 middle school改为No.4 Middle School
4.she改为her
5.in改为on
6.去掉to
7.去掉are
8.去掉the
9.it改为so
10.have改为has
11.in改为at
12.去掉to
13.it's改为it is
14.do改为does
15.去掉the
16.play改为plays
17.去掉because
18.see改为read

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