谁能帮我改一下这篇作文啊?这次春假期间,我看了许多书,其中我最爱看的一本书的书名是《海底两万里》,这本书非常有意思,我两天就把这本书看完了,这本书讲的是:阿尤纳斯教授和助手康塞

谁能帮我改一下这篇作文啊?这次春假期间,我看了许多书,其中我最爱看的一本书的书名是《海底两万里》,这本书非常有意思,我两天就把这本书看完了,这本书讲的是:阿尤纳斯教授和助手康塞
谁能帮我改一下这篇作文啊?
这次春假期间,我看了许多书,其中我最爱看的一本书的书名是《海底两万里》,这本书非常有意思,我两天就把这本书看完了,这本书讲的是:阿尤纳斯教授和助手康塞尔,鱼枪手尼德为了抓海怪竟被潜艇鹦鹉号的舰长尼摩软禁,并开始惊险的海底之旅……
本书作者--儒勒.凡尔纳是一位杰出的科幻小说家,本书也是他的代表作之一.写书时,人类不但还没有发明潜艇,甚至连电灯都还没有问市,可他在小说中,却活生生的创造了一艘潜艇--鹦鹉螺号,让书中人物搭上了一艘想像中的鹦鹉螺号,在短短的不到十个月的时间内航行了太平洋、大西洋、红海、地中海、北极海等,航程共行了六千万海里.目睹了无数的海底奇观,并发现了海底煤矿和沉船的宝藏.凭着坚忍的意志力与过人的智慧,终于克服了所有的困难.经历了难已想象的海底冒险.
同学们!我们一起来搭上这艘奇妙的潜艇,去看看海底森林、珊瑚王国、神秘的宝藏和沉船,并且勇敢地和大章鱼作战,设法从南极冰壁间脱险.还有很多很多新鲜、刺激的遭遇等着我们去领略.来吧!我们一起去探索!
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谁能帮我改一下这篇作文啊?这次春假期间,我看了许多书,其中我最爱看的一本书的书名是《海底两万里》,这本书非常有意思,我两天就把这本书看完了,这本书讲的是:阿尤纳斯教授和助手康塞
Higher price of unity and cooperation
Unity is strength,unity in all aspects of need.Our community must be united in order to bloom the more exercise Korea's glory,it leaves a co-unity.
Behind the colorful life,cooperation in numerous sectors.Therefore,the importance of cooperation we should have a correct understanding,solidarity and cooperation to enrich our lives,and cooperation is essential in all walks of life.
In various production sectors,it is by division of labor,and at several large firms.This is nothing unusual nor surprising.Produce a car for example,a worker can do it alone?No,but it is not totally negated.Because more people are done through cooperation,you produce shell,I produce parts that he assembled,through the cooperation of many people,can produce a better and faster cars.
China launches manned spacecraft,making China the very few countries that can launch a manned spacecraft,Yang Liwei's success.How many people behind the unity and cooperation,the number of covered behind the success of failure.Perhaps the failure of China's space industry with many,many.But we consistently continue the sustained efforts,through cooperation,and finally succeeded.If there is a little error in the launch,I am afraid we are welcoming another is a failure.Shows that cooperation is indispensable.
The world,and ultimately,cooperation,and cooperation has become a springboard for success.With the cooperation of life will have success,success is a manifestation of cooperation.State management requires the cooperation of the people,the normal operation of a plant need to co-workers.
This dazzling colorful,colorful world,everywhere cooperation,an operation's success,needs the cooperation of doctors and nurses.World War II,China,Britain,the United States,Russia and other countries together to deal with Japan,Germany,reflects the importance of cooperation in the war.
In real life,some surprising things,some things not worth mentioning,that all life needs,can not produce their own.Therefore,living in unity and cooperation of human life,human happiness is no doubt,but the hypocrisy of human cooperation is cooperation.
Not only humans learned to cooperate,even the little ants,after the discovery of food,will work together.The food moved "back home" they are a small body,can actually many times more than what their own transportation.Embodies the spirit of unity and cooperation.
Life,we must learn to cooperate,to understand the importance of cooperation.To cooperate with us.China needs today,tomorrow's China is more cooperation needed,to let us together build a better country.