用英语描写游记!急!急!急!帮我写一封信关于自己的游记. 1:Use of fact and opinion, 2:use of humour, 3:vivid descriptive language,4:sentence lenght variation effect.(利用其中的一种写法,帮帮忙啊!

用英语描写游记!急!急!急!帮我写一封信关于自己的游记. 1:Use of fact and opinion, 2:use of humour, 3:vivid descriptive language,4:sentence lenght variation effect.(利用其中的一种写法,帮帮忙啊!
用英语描写游记!
急!急!急!帮我写一封信关于自己的游记. 1:Use of fact and opinion, 2:use of humour, 3:vivid descriptive language,4:sentence lenght variation effect.(利用其中的一种写法,帮帮忙啊!

用英语描写游记!急!急!急!帮我写一封信关于自己的游记. 1:Use of fact and opinion, 2:use of humour, 3:vivid descriptive language,4:sentence lenght variation effect.(利用其中的一种写法,帮帮忙啊!
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I clearly remember my first time to go to the Great Wall in Beijing - the longest building in the world.It is 8.8 kilometers in total which stretches from Shanhaiguan in the east to Lop Nur in the west.It is also long and big enough to be observed by satellite in the space.The day I went to the Great Wall with my family was during the Chinese national day's break.There were people everywhere,including children,old people,young people and foreign tourists.It was so crowded that we advanced by being pushed by the crowd.The weather was getting hotter and hotter.As a result,we decided to go back when we were in the middle of the whole trip which made our trip come to an end.
Although,this journey was kind of imperfect because we didn't climb up to the top of the mountain,we were still very happy with ourselves.Because participation is the most important thing when you are trying to do something.So I think the journey is meaningful to us because we gain a lot of pleasure from it.
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在网上找到了一篇英文的游记，自己改了改其中的语法错误
I went to Chong Qing in July the 22th.It is a city which was built near mountains long ago. People call it the Mountain City. In Chong Qing, I visited the Red Stone Cent...

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在网上找到了一篇英文的游记，自己改了改其中的语法错误
I went to Chong Qing in July the 22th.It is a city which was built near mountains long ago. People call it the Mountain City. In Chong Qing, I visited the Red Stone Center(红色教育基地,或者红石头街) to see the place where the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There are a lot of dogs and soldiers armed with guns near the prison. The prisoners lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink.They only had twenty minutes to stay outside each day.
I belive they are the heros in our hearts. I sure will respect learn from the spirits of them.

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