帮忙看看有没有病句,再用英语翻译几个句子My name is XXX.I was born in April 6,1994.I`m 14years old now.I like sports,art and listening to music.I have many ideals,but I most want to be a lawyer.I`m study in No.1 Middle School.I like

帮忙看看有没有病句,再用英语翻译几个句子My name is XXX.I was born in April 6,1994.I`m 14years old now.I like sports,art and listening to music.I have many ideals,but I most want to be a lawyer.I`m study in No.1 Middle School.I like
帮忙看看有没有病句,再用英语翻译几个句子
My name is XXX.I was born in April 6,1994.I`m 14years old now.I like sports,art and listening to music.I have many ideals,but I most want to be a lawyer.I`m study in No.1 Middle School.I like to study English very much.I think it`s very interesting and exciting.I like reading the Chinese traditional poems and writing,too.I can make Chinese knot. I think the knot is one of the symbols of China.We are going to hold the Olympic Games.I`m very excited about it.I hope I can do something for it.
我可以教外国人说中文,也可以给他们讲中国的历史,使他们能更好地了解中国．我也可以帮助他们在中国更好地旅行,体味中国文化
我想,中国举办奥运会是一件很了不起的事,这也是一个与外国朋友交流的机会,我更应该作为一个主人,欢迎来自各地的朋友们

帮忙看看有没有病句,再用英语翻译几个句子My name is XXX.I was born in April 6,1994.I`m 14years old now.I like sports,art and listening to music.I have many ideals,but I most want to be a lawyer.I`m study in No.1 Middle School.I like
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but I want to be a lawyer most
most移至句尾较好
like writing and reading...
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你的英语还是不错的
I can teach the foreigners Chinese, and tell them about Chinese history, this could make them understand China better (这里this改为which用定语从句更好,怕你没学过).
I can help them travel in China and touch/experience the Chinese culture.
I think it's wonderful for China to hold the Olympic Games, it's a chance to communicate with foreign friends.
I should act as a host and welcome friends all over the world.

1..I was born in April 6,1994.介词应该用on.
2.ideal没有l，直接是ideas.
3，翻译：i can teach foreigners chinese,also i can tell them chinese history which makes them know china better.then i can help them tra...

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1..I was born in April 6,1994.介词应该用on.
2.ideal没有l，直接是ideas.
3，翻译：i can teach foreigners chinese,also i can tell them chinese history which makes them know china better.then i can help them travel in china much better than they may and help them understand the culture of china.
i think,it's so proud that china would hold the Olympic Games. and it is a good opportunity to communicate with foreign friends. i should welcome all the friends from the world as a host.

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