she has many toy bus ,but she has a cell phone ,too.这个句子有什么错误吗

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she has many toy bus ,but she has a cell phone ,too.这个句子有什么错误吗

she has many toy bus ,but she has a cell phone ,too.这个句子有什么错误吗
she has many toy bus ,but she has a cell phone ,too.这个句子有什么错误吗

she has many toy bus ,but she has a cell phone ,too.这个句子有什么错误吗
toy bus应该变成复数,即toy buses,but 改成and ,因为这是一个表示并列关系的,并不是表示转折关系的.

She has many toy buses, but she has only one cell phone.

语法没有错误,但是用词不当。因为“她有手机”和“她有玩具车”不是转折关系,而是并列关系,所以不应该用 but,而应该用 and:she has many toy bus ,and she has a cell phone , too.

bus变复数,觉得这个句子可以改成'She has not only many toy buses but also a cell phone'好像更对劲儿...

1.many应与复数连用,bus应改为bues 2.连词使用错误but应改为并列连词and 3.或者去掉too然后在has后加only