Help to find out the errors.Aug 13 2009 Thu Fine I thought that don't wriet the diary.Because that I can't do it well,and no one help me.Maybe the high gtemperature gave me some kinds.I'll depend on myself,and I'll chee

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Help to find out the errors.Aug 13 2009    Thu                           Fine  I thought that don't wriet the diary.Because that I can't  do it well,and no one help me.Maybe the high gtemperature gave me some kinds.I'll depend on myself,and I'll chee

Help to find out the errors.Aug 13 2009 Thu Fine I thought that don't wriet the diary.Because that I can't do it well,and no one help me.Maybe the high gtemperature gave me some kinds.I'll depend on myself,and I'll chee
Help to find out the errors.
Aug 13 2009 Thu Fine
I thought that don't wriet the diary.Because that I can't do it well,and no one help me.Maybe the high gtemperature gave me some kinds.I'll depend on myself,and I'll cheer up.Must be try my best to do it.I would not hava a good job all of my life if I didn't work hard again. Time is money.I must cherished it.
BadBoy.

Help to find out the errors.Aug 13 2009 Thu Fine I thought that don't wriet the diary.Because that I can't do it well,and no one help me.Maybe the high gtemperature gave me some kinds.I'll depend on myself,and I'll chee
有很多错误.帮你重写吧:
Aug.13 2009 Thu.Fine
I'm thinking about not to write diary any more,because I can't do it well,and no one helps me.But maybe the high temperature gives me some courage.I'll depend on myself,and I'll cheer up.I must try my best to do it.I won't have a good job all my life if I don't work hard now.Time is money.I must cherish it.
Badboy

说实话,跟本看不懂。这是拿什么翻译软件直接弄出来的吧。

每一个字母我都认识!我真的很利害!就差四五百分就可以上清华了!

I thought that don't wriet the diary
从句没有主语,且其谓语应该是write吧,属于拼写错误,并且主句thought 而从句don't 不合语法,应统一时态
Because that I can't do it well,and no one help me.
that去掉,help改为helps
Maybe the high ...

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I thought that don't wriet the diary
从句没有主语,且其谓语应该是write吧,属于拼写错误,并且主句thought 而从句don't 不合语法,应统一时态
Because that I can't do it well,and no one help me.
that去掉,help改为helps
Maybe the high temperature gave me some kinds
kinds后面应该加of 与名词,意为高温给了你某种什么东西,否则是半句话
I'll depend on myself,and I'll cheer up.
cheer 与up 中间加myself
Must be try my best to do it
改为:I must try my best to do it
I would not hava a good job all of my life if I didn't work hard again
of去掉,didn't改为don't
I must cherished it.
cherished改为cherish

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