My dear、 my heart really hurts really really hurts 、My dear,you feel it?

My dear、 my heart really hurts really really hurts 、My dear,you feel it?
My dear、 my heart really hurts really really hurts 、My dear,you feel it?

My dear、 my heart really hurts really really hurts 、My dear,you feel it?
亲爱的,我的心很痛,真的很痛,亲爱的.你感受到了吗（或者：你知道吗）?

亲爱的，我的心真的真的真的受伤了...亲爱的，你能感觉到吗？
那个you feel it建议改成can you feel it?