托福作文390字 写成这样能得多少分啊In this advanced society,grasping some special skills has been more and more important and it,either directly orindirectly,have a hand in everybody’s work and study.The issue that peoplewho have deve

托福作文390字 写成这样能得多少分啊In this advanced society,grasping some special skills has been more and more important and it,either directly orindirectly,have a hand in everybody’s work and study.The issue that peoplewho have deve
托福作文390字 写成这样能得多少分啊
In this advanced society,grasping some special skills has been more and more important and it,either directly orindirectly,have a hand in everybody’s work and study.The issue that peoplewho have developed many different kinds of skills are more successful thanpeople who focus on only one skill has received lots of concern.Some peopletake that we can engage in one field only using one skill for granted.However,they fail to take using more methods to solve problem and the ability to timemanagement into consideration and all these factors can help people who developmore skills succeed.
Developing more skills means to have more waysto achieve your goal.More skill can help us to deal with the problem when wemeet,it can stimulate people to come up with more methods.For example,when asalesman who is only good at communicating convinces the customer to buy hisproduct,he persuades the customer face to face for a long time and soon thecustomer will get bored and go away.If a salesman who is good at not onlycommunicating but also making flash,when he convinces the customer,he can usea laptop to show a delicate flash about his product while he is interpretingthe product’s function.And then,the customer is willing to buy one,becausethe customer has a better understanding of the product.So,developing moreskills can help us to succeed.
Developing more skills means to show aperson has a strong ability to time management.It spends people lots of timeon learning different skills,so he need to set up schedules and manage hisstudy time as well as work time more effectively.With the development of theability to time management,he can do everything perfectly and quickly.For example,there are several tasks need to do at a time.The person who has more skillscan finish them by an elaborate time schedule.On the contrary,the men whofocus on one skill will deal with them low-efficiently because he isn’t used tochanging project frequently.
To sum up,it is very clear that people whohave developed many different kinds of skills are more successful than peoplewho focus on only one skill because they work in different ways and have abetter ability to time management.

托福作文390字 写成这样能得多少分啊In this advanced society,grasping some special skills has been more and more important and it,either directly orindirectly,have a hand in everybody’s work and study.The issue that peoplewho have deve
额……个人意见,这个作文呢,字数其实是不少了,但是逻辑上不是很好,论点鲜明但是论据不是很strong,语言上也是比较啰嗦,语法略有小错误,但使整体的连接词用的不错.如果你两篇作文都是这个水平呢,那我个人觉得应该在18到24之间吧.额……范围大了点……21左右吧……也没法再精确了……
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Q:What is more useful to time management for learning different kinds of skills or just learning one.
Firstly,there have two little problem in this essay.And these are the condition we can happily...

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Q:What is more useful to time management for learning different kinds of skills or just learning one.
Firstly,there have two little problem in this essay.And these are the condition we can happily remedy.
There have some spelling problems you didn't use the space when you were typewriteing,but it's not important.
And the other one problem is the noun's singular/plural form that you always forgotten to add the s.
Because i don't know the particular question,so i only can judge this article easily.
You used more long sentence and spaced them by the comma.It's really good that you can write these lots of long sentence and this it's the foreigner like,too.
The suggestion is you need to practise writing some attributive clause or you can think if a foreigner see these so many long sentence in one essay,he will boring.So try some subordinate clause,it will develop your score,trust me.
Your main idea,i mean,your support point is it's good to learn more kinds of skills.So you need to discribe your main idea more,make more example to support this point takes place of minor points.
Your two example is really well,but we need more variety.
More one thing,when you are writing a essay,don't use the contract be best,using the contract is the conversational English and foreigner don't like.
This essay is good,but i am a chinese after all.So finally i give the score of 17.

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