托福口语第一题,我这个答案会不会有点牵强.问你将来理想的工作是什么Well,according to my understanding.I'd like to be a teacher in the future because the person who influenced me most positively is my middle-school teacher

托福口语第一题,我这个答案会不会有点牵强.问你将来理想的工作是什么Well,according to my understanding.I'd like to be a teacher in the future because the person who influenced me most positively is my middle-school teacher
托福口语第一题,我这个答案会不会有点牵强.
问你将来理想的工作是什么
Well,according to my understanding.I'd like to be a teacher in the future because the person who influenced me most positively is my middle-school teacher :Mrs Jane.and I want to be a respectful teacher like her.firstly,I used to be a irritable guy until Mrs JANE changed me with her extraordinary patience.It took her a lot of efforts to teach me about good and bad.Even though sometimes I got radical,she was still patient enough to bring me back to the track.In addition,Mrs Jane always provides me with assistance when I got tripped into rubs,for instance,After I got failed in ENGLISH exam,she encouraged me and tutored me in English every night until I got a high score in the next exam.So that's why I want to be a teacher like MRs JANE.

托福口语第一题,我这个答案会不会有点牵强.问你将来理想的工作是什么Well,according to my understanding.I'd like to be a teacher in the future because the person who influenced me most positively is my middle-school teacher
没什么大问题,要很苛刻地要求的话,说人的部分偏多了些,不过真的无大碍.最重要的还是你的流利度和口音.一二题考的就是流利度和口音,然后就是你对话题有没有可说的,如果回答在结构和内容上与45s完美搭配就满分了.显然,你说了很多,所以只要你流利又没啥口音,应该是高分.一二题死最惨的就是,没话可说,然后还不停地eh.祝你拿到高分!

Well,according to my understanding（according to my understanding多余）.I'd like to be a teacher in the future because the person who influenced me most positively（positively多余了） is my middle-school teach...

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Well,according to my understanding（according to my understanding多余）.I'd like to be a teacher in the future because the person who influenced me most positively（positively多余了） is my middle-school teacher :Mrs Jane.and I want to be a respectful teacher like her.firstly（可以改成at first),I used to be a irritable guy until(用but) Mrs JANE changed me with her extraordinary patience.It took her a lot of efforts to teach me about good and bad(goods and bads才对）.Even though sometimes I got radical,she was still patient enough to bring me back to the track.In addition,Mrs Jane always provides（provided，注意前后时态一样） me with assistance when I got tripped into rubs,for instance,After I got(got多余） failed in ENGLISH exams,she encouraged me and tutored me in English every night until I got a high score in the next exam.So that's why I want to be a teacher like MRs JANE. 我觉得还不错，基本都是小问题，我都点出来了，应该可以的，能不能多给点分啊，我最近做团队任务呢，还差一点分啊

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