跪谢!剑7 TEST1小作文 求批改The table illustrates data about consumer expenditure on varied categories in five different countries(Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey) in 2002.As we can see in the table that the amount of money spent in thr

跪谢!剑7 TEST1小作文 求批改The table illustrates data about consumer expenditure on varied categories in five different countries(Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey) in 2002.As we can see in the table that the amount of money spent in thr
跪谢!剑7 TEST1小作文 求批改
The table illustrates data about consumer expenditure on varied categories in five different countries(Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey) in 2002.
As we can see in the table that the amount of money spent in three groups was given. More specifically, in these five countries, Food/Drinks/Tobacoo group accounted for the largest part of three sectors. Consumer spending on Clothing/Footwear was consistently jus under 10% while the number of Leisure/Education consumption fluctuated between 1.5% and 5%. In terms of national differences, Italians spent least on food but most on clothing(16.36% and 9.00%,respectively) whilst Turkish consumed most money on food but least on recreation(32.14% and 4.35%,respectively). Similarly, Sweden and Spain consumed least on clothing and leisure (5.4% and 1.98%,respectively). Compared with these countries just mentioned, irish consumer expenditure retain stable at the ordinary level in each group.
Therefore, it can be clearly seen the consuming preference varied from the national culture reflected by the different percentage of consumption.

跪谢!剑7 TEST1小作文 求批改The table illustrates data about consumer expenditure on varied categories in five different countries(Ireland,Italy,Spain,Sweden and Turkey) in 2002.As we can see in the table that the amount of money spent in thr
我也是挣扎中的烤鸭一员,只是说下我的见解,希望互相勉励吧
第一段改写得很好啊,我好喜欢
第二段感觉第一句不太对啊,图标给的是百分比而不是花销的量是吧.
Food/Drinks/Tobacoo group accounted for the largest part of（我想用in是不是好一点呢）the three sectors
还有在说到国家间差异的时候,我不太清楚你是在跟其他国家间对比呢,还是说是国家内部这个数据的对比呢.读起来有点迷糊.
还有..你很久都没有处理你的问题啦,你现在已经考了么?

As we can see in the table that the amount of money spent in three groups has been given. Much specifically,``````````````````````Consumer spending on Clothing/Footwear was consistently just under ...

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As we can see in the table that the amount of money spent in three groups has been given. Much specifically,``````````````````````Consumer spending on Clothing/Footwear was consistently just under 10% while the number of Leisure or Education consumption fluctuated between 1.5% and 5%.```````````` the national culture reflected by the different percentages of consumption.

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下表说明了在五个不同国家的不同类别的消费支出（爱尔兰，意大利，西班牙，瑞典和土耳其）在2002年的数据。正如表中我们可以看到，在三组花的钱的金额。更具体地说，在这五个国家，占食品/饮料/ Tobacoo组三个部门中最大的一部分。服装/鞋类的消费支出是根据10％的一贯血统，而休闲/教育消费的1.5％和5％之间波动。国家差异方面，意大利食品支出最少，但最衣物上（分别为16.36％和9.00％），而土耳...

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下表说明了在五个不同国家的不同类别的消费支出（爱尔兰，意大利，西班牙，瑞典和土耳其）在2002年的数据。正如表中我们可以看到，在三组花的钱的金额。更具体地说，在这五个国家，占食品/饮料/ Tobacoo组三个部门中最大的一部分。服装/鞋类的消费支出是根据10％的一贯血统，而休闲/教育消费的1.5％和5％之间波动。国家差异方面，意大利食品支出最少，但最衣物上（分别为16.36％和9.00％），而土耳其消耗最赚钱的食物，但至少娱乐（分别为32.14％和4.35％）。同样，瑞典和西班牙消耗至少服装和休闲（分别为5.4％及1.98％）。刚才提到的这些国家相比，爱尔兰的消费支出保持稳定，在各组中的普通水平。因此，它可以清楚地看到从不同的消费比例反映了国家文化不同的消费偏好。

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