作业帮please help me check my languange and correct it.thank you!after many round of discussion, we finally come to a decision to make a social awareness advertisement about non smoking issues during the pregnancy.we come out with this idea when i accident
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please help me check my languange and correct it.thank you!after many round of discussion, we finally come to a decision to make a social awareness advertisement about non smoking issues during the pregnancy.we come out with this idea when i accident
please help me check my languange and correct it.thank you!
after many round of discussion, we finally come to a decision to make a social awareness advertisement about non smoking issues during the pregnancy.we come out with this idea when i accidentally see a cigaratte advertisement on a magazine .at the bottom there have a such warning:expectant mother smoking during prenancy will make the baby birth weight smaller and being born premature.suddenly,i have a thought that to use this concept to do my advertisement to alert our expectant.
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please help me check my languange and correct it.thank you!after many round of discussion, we finally come to a decision to make a social awareness advertisement about non smoking issues during the pregnancy.we come out with this idea when i accident
After many rounds discussion,finally,we decite to make a social awareness advertisement on non smoking issues during the pregnancy.we get the idea from a cigaratte advertisement on a magazine.there is a warning at bottom :expectant mother smoking during prenancy will make the baby birth weight smallerand being born premature .
多轮讨论之后，我们最终决定制作一则关于在怀孕期间禁烟问题的公益广告。这个想法是我不经意间在某杂志上看到一则香烟广告后冒出来的，那则广告下方有如下警示：孕妇在怀孕期间吸烟会导致早产及出生婴儿体重较轻。突然间，我想到用这个概念来做我的广告以提醒孕妇。...
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多轮讨论之后，我们最终决定制作一则关于在怀孕期间禁烟问题的公益广告。这个想法是我不经意间在某杂志上看到一则香烟广告后冒出来的，那则广告下方有如下警示：孕妇在怀孕期间吸烟会导致早产及出生婴儿体重较轻。突然间，我想到用这个概念来做我的广告以提醒孕妇。
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